Posted September 27, 2023 at 12:08 am

Foyle absolutely nerding out about the logistics of inter world travel here!

Missing Monday was originally written in non-chronological order. The concept was to introduce Monday in Ch1, then have Monday disappear 3 years into the future when Foyle was expecting her to return, and then going back in time to fill in the relationship between these two characters to help understand what had happened, and jump back and forth until we caught up to the present.

I still really like that idea, but I didn't have the finesse to pull it off as effectively as I wanted. It started to really muddy up some of the emotions of the story and the details of what was happening when. Sometimes being ambitious means you miss completely, you know? So I went back in about halfway through the comic and reordered the chapters to be in chronological order. It makes the art style jump around a little (since chapter 3 was illustrated before chapter 2) but I think it makes things make more sense.

I kind of wonder how the story would have completed if I had been able to stick to my original idea, but I'm still happy I made the change.

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