The fun thing about early chapters in a webcomic is you're still getting a feel for what visual elements you're going to use to tell your story so you throw a lot of things into the mix that might change later on.

Something that jumps out like a sore thumb to me right now is that I hardly ever use interior monologue in the comic so it seems really strange to have a page full of it here! It pops up from time to time but very rarely. I think it just hit me that Foyle is the kind of character to talk to herself, so why bother leaving things as thoughts when she'd probably be saying them out loud? In later chapters this would just be normal dialogue balloons...